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29 September 2008 @ 03:15 pm
2 Atlantis Drabbles  
These two I wrote for a competition over on Chevron One for a competition. The idea was to write what you want to see happen in season 5.

Welcome Home

Her hair was longer.
He didn’t mind.
She looked skinnier,
Perhaps her clothes were just tighter…
Was that leather?
A darkness lurked behind her eyes.
He wanted to fight away the pain

If only he could turn back time.

Then she was standing before him,
Her green eyes only on his.
Forgotten were the dozen armed soldiers who didn't believe.

But he did.

His arms were around her in an instant
Crushing her body to his.

Something that had been gone for so long
Was now where it belonged.

John Sheppard sighed and whispered in her ear,
“Welcome home, Elizabeth.”


“Are you sure about this, Rodney?”

Rodney looked at Sheppard and briefly hesitated. “Yes, let’s just do it already.” He turned back to his laptop and executed the command.

The pod before them hummed to life. John and Ronon stepped forward to catch the unconscious body that fell forwards. Rodney stumbled out of the way as they placed him on the waiting gurney. Keller instantly began checking the man’s vitals.

Moments later, his eyes were flickering opening. “What…?”

Rodney was instantly at his side, his face beaming. “We did it Carson! We figured it out! You’re going to be alright.”

majoricemajorice on October 5th, 2009 07:17 pm (UTC)
And then what happened with John and Elizabeth? Or would you have to change your story rating to continue! lol j/k

Good to see your still writing. Keep up the good work! :)

Oh yeah I am from the old Xanga days! Saw I havn't been on here in 128 weeks. 2 1/2 years!

I still need to watch my recorded SGU